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'Elmtown-Between Rounds'. These two women are not fighting for sport. They are fighting each other over the possession of a man. These are two rivals who hate each other, but even so they have both agreed on rules. One is there are rounds, and in this illustration the usurper Martha Jones is trying to recuperate from the ferocious beating to her body, and especially to her breasts by her rival, the wife of the man they are fighting for. This fight so far has mostly gone the wife’s way and Jones hasn't been able to release all the hate in her gloved fists and drive them deep into the flesh of the other woman - Yet. But there is something which is driving these two women that is even more powerful than hate, and it is lust.
To quote from the story, ‘As Mrs. Jones was being revived in her corner, her sister and second exclaimed, “Oh Martha! She hurt you so terribly! You don’t have to go on. That’s enough!” “I can …take…it,” the widow gasped. “I…can…take…it!” “I know your fierce pride won’t let you quit. But sis, darling, I don’t want to see you suffer more!” “I’ve…got…to…take…it!” the widow panted. “Got to!” “But darling! Is anything worth such suffering? "Yes. Oh yes. A man!” Then the bell rang for the next round.’
Those who are following this sequence of illustrations have to remember that it is a body versus body fight between these two women for the winner to possess this one man. And a four ounce glove can dig deep into the flesh in a most cruel fashion. Jones, is trying by force to wrest away the husband of Doyle, the wife. Normally she has no right to the husband, except in this case it has been agreed that the right of possession will be determined by force of arms. Actually, by force of gloved fists. Those who are devoted followers of this unfolding classic story of the 'Special Event At The Elmtown Women's Club', hereby depicted by a series of weekly illustrations, shall get their fill. The battle has been joined and both women have been landing punishing blows to the sexual parts of the other's body. Each woman is trying to destroy the sexuality of the other, but each by different means. To be added that the women club members in the story (which I published decades ago) who are watching this fight are now fully sexually aroused in seeing these two good looking women battering each other's body in a 'fight to the finish'. And the anticipation is now over for the 'Deviant Art' viewers who have been wanting the waiting to be over and the two to 'get it on'. 'Nuff said. Drew
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~ReannaO Jun 27, 2010
Suture her breasts up-she can handle at least another hour.
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~camre105 Jun 6, 2010
this would most definitely be a wet dream! If it were for real and he was an observer he would have to change his pants by the time the fight was over. What makes it erotic is the fact that these women want him so bad that they are willing to fight for him. This is every man's wet dream! I am beginning to think that most women know this! I have talked to a few women that have that have told me that they have entered into a cat fight because thier husband or boyfriend asked them to. To my surprise all of those that I talked to did it originally knowing it got their husbands rocks off. Also surprising is that they found out that they enjoyed fighting with other women. I really love this series! I keep coming back to them and use my wild imagination with me being the man of their interest.
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*drewhammond Jun 6, 2010
Thank you. I'm glad you like it. It was a milestone on combative women when it first appeared. Drew.
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*EdGarcia May 19, 2009
I look forward to finding out who the Man in the middle was rooting for.
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*drewhammond May 19, 2009
Actually it's the dream of most married men. A voluptuous outsider wants him and is willing to fight his wife in a fight to the finish boxing match, winner take all - which in this case 'all' is the husband. He let it be known that whomever wins he will honor the terms. Lucky bastard, great story.
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Mood: Anger ~Tyson87 May 19, 2009
Ouch!
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~dodger19 May 18, 2009
the story line is compelling, the illustrations above average. but based on the above snippet, the dialogue probably could do with a rewrite.
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*drewhammond May 19, 2009
Good observation - Sorta. This is a case whereby the sum is greater than its parts. Taken as a whole, (pictures, writing, theme) it's a masterwork. The illustrations are pure ink lined with no half-tone shadowing. And yet the power of the brutal action is depicted in the purity of the black ink upon white paper. This is a fight to the finish, no decision here, only one remains standing. No gray area here, an ending as clear and final as black contrasts with white. As are the pictures. Now, as concerns the writing. True, the writing is not sophisticated, and yet when I published the work I made sure I didn’t alter any of the original writer’s text, except to correct some obvious errors. And adding a bit of commentary, making sure the reader could see it as an interjection by me. The power of the writing is it is straight forward, always moving, and packs a wallop of a punch in describing the physical and emotional Agon both women went through during their match. Good word, ‘Agon’ and I suspect much to your liking. However, the author wasn’t writing Greek tragedy, whereby the Gods had already chosen sides; and by their power dictated the winner and loser. This was Shakespearian in its basic theme. Of course the writing is not of the quality of the Bard’s prose, but what Shakespeare brought to the fore in Western literature was that ordinary people can, and do, make extraordinary decisions; and in the doing obtain glory, or in contrast suffer horrific consequences for their actions. And this author understood this Shakespearian truth, in that he jumped 400 years and did something so American. He pitted two ordinary American women against each in a brutal boxing match, this in order for their collective desire that one sexually destroy the other, and in the doing win the possession of a man they both love. The consequence of loss is the humiliation that the loser give up everything and leave town. Harking back to the old west – ‘Get out of Dodge City’. And what drove these two females to choose Agon – The love of a man. Quite a drive that. Greater than lust. Powerful drives are at work here, powerful enough to stake everything held dear on a painful outcome. To quote, “But darling! Is anything worth such suffering? "Yes. Oh yes. A man!” ‘Then the bell rang for the next round.’ ‘Nuff said. Drew
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~dodger19 May 19, 2009
thanks for your reply. I agree with most of your observations about the theme and illustrations. both are, as I stated, compelling and well done and go as far as possible in telling the tale in a single dimenensional manner. But as I'm certain you know better than most, it's the words that can propel both the theme and illustrations to that multi dimensional story telling nirvana that truly deserves the sobriquet "masterwork." that said, let me add that I'm making this judgement based on what I called a "snippet" and that, of course, is always dangerous. the entirety of the piece of writing may not be as stilted as I thought this brief extract of dialougue to be. thanks for providing this work, for all your efforts on this site and for enduring the slings and arrows of a Jesuit trained scribbler into whom it was beaten (literally) that every piece of artistic work can always be improved.
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*drewhammond May 19, 2009
With some works, either visual, or written, or musical, it's best to do what the title of that song by The Beatles says: 'Let It Be'. I mean, how can the greatest piece of music ever written this side of Paradise be improved: Beethoven's 'Ninth'. 'Nuff said. Drew. Other than to add, sling some arrows Hamlet's way.
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